BIOMIMICRY COMPETITION HELP US TO WIN :) !!!

Hi

As part of my exchange at the Manchester School of Architecture, I participate in a competition.

The price of the public is determined by the Internet users, more the number of "I like" is important, more chance I have of winning. If you find my project interesting, Thank you for helping me to win this competition.

To vote, just click on the link, and click on the heart.
Thank you for your votes and shares !!!

Thank you for your help :)

All critics and feedback are welcome :)

http://www.eleven-magazine.com/?entrants=fertilize-the-desert

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Permalink Reply by Stefan Videnov on March 19, 2017 at 4:19pm

The graphics are nice and the project is bold!

Two things come to my mind:
1) Why would a strictly utilitarian object like this have such a free shape which would hinder the economics part?
2) You should consider rewriting the text. There are some grammar mistakes, but the thing that is most off-putting is the vocabulary. Avoid using "us", "we", "would be able to", "will".. you get the idea. Explain the project without having in mind the prospect that it will be built or that you were the designers.

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